The proposal should be a description of the student’s proposed dissertation project. It is important to clearly convey: (1) what the scientific questions are, (2) why they are significant, and (3) whether the approaches and techniques proposed are the most appropriate. Students may include relevant preliminary data from their own work or from others in the lab, but this is not a requirement.
Input/Advice
Students are encouraged to initially discuss the overall aims and format of the proposal with their dissertation advisors. However, the proposal must be authored solely by the student. Once a student and dissertation advisor are in agreement on the aims and format of the proposal, the student should receive no further input or feedback from faculty members in writing the proposal or preparing for the oral defense. Students can seek input from graduate students and postdoctoral fellows on their written proposal and presentation for the oral defense.
Guidelines for the Written Proposal
The written proposal should be no longer than 10 pages in length, single-spaced, with 0.75” margins all around, and with size 11 Arial font. The references do not count towards the page limit. Organization of the report should be as follows:
A. Specific Aims (limit 1 page): The Specific Aims page should stand alone, is separate from the proposal, and counts towards the 10-page limit. Provide a paragraph on the knowledge gaps in the field that builds to a clearly articulated overarching hypothesis. Propose two or three Specific Aims. Each aim should broadly represent a question that you seek to answer. No aim should depend on a prior aim. If possible, include a schematic on this page summarizing your Aims and include an Impact Statement. There should be no references on this page.
B. Background and Significance (~2 pages): Summarize what is known about the field, emphasizing how your proposed research will fill in gaps in our knowledge and advance our understanding of the biological processes involved. After a succinct literature review, structure this section as follows: (1) x is not known, (2) it is important to know it because, (3) a good system and appropriate reagents are available (or could be developed) to answer this question, and (4) how we will answer it is summarized in specific aim y.
C. Preliminary Results: This section should describe the experimental system, which will most likely be established to some extent in the lab or in other labs working in the field. Preliminary data is useful but not required. Relevant work from others in the lab may be included. If a proposal is based on developing an entirely new system in the lab, specific data/experimental information from the literature that would not be appropriate to include in the background section may be included here.
D. Experimental Design and Methods: Organize these according to your specific aims. For each aim, provide a brief rationale for the experimental approach and then provide a conceptual description of the techniques involved (no lists of buffers, please!) with a discussion of what controls will be performed and how the data will be analyzed. Next, summarize what the different experimental outcomes might be and how you would deal with each. Remember, the best experiments are those in which every outcome provides interpretable information; occasional yes or no experiments will be tolerated but you should try to avoid experiments in which the likelihood of an interesting outcome is remote. Identify potential pitfalls of your proposed experiments and alternative strategies. Mention these at the end of each Aim in this section. It is acceptable to incorporate the Preliminary Results into the Experimental Design section, incorporating data related to each Aim prior to the actual proposed experiments.
You are expected to work with your dissertation advisor and seek his or her advice in the preparation of the aims and format of your proposal. However, the writing must be completely executed by the student. To reiterate, once the student and dissertation advisor are in agreement on the aims and format of the proposal, the student should receive no further input or feedback from faculty members including the dissertation advisor. Students are encouraged to seek input from graduate students and postdoctoral fellows on their written proposal and presentation for the oral defense.
Final copies of your written proposal must be emailed to all members of your PQE Committee and the immunology program administrator at least one week prior to the date of the PQE.